AL-exe's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Particles]

Easy in cheating =(

The game is done in a good, formal style - it's nice and smooth. I like it.

Music suits the game deeply.

BUT! There is a bug that ruins all the fun. The bug allows you to cheat easily - move mouse of the player area and re-enter it at the other edge - WHOA! Teleport!

This bug is related to all games with simple startDrag() function or with smooth ones that use mouse coordinates for the ball within setInterval().

Fix it - and it will be great ;)

Voted 4.

[Sprite Platform Game Tut!]

Nice tutorial. But should be fixed

I found it to be done very well.

But there are some minuses:

- the spaces can be recognized hardly in the text due to the selected font

- there is no "back" button, only "forward" one

- the code listing in some frames is very tiny and theselecting color is invisible. Maybe it will better to make the fontsize bigger and to add some scrollbars.

- the parrallax effect shown in the last example shouldn't be there, i suppose ;)

- please, make the "resset" button for the examples.

I've given you "5", hoping that you will fix this issues ;)

Good job :]

[The stick ninja game]

Need improvement

First of all, you should add the preloader. The text "Wait ten minutes and then press play" caused me to laugh for some minutes -)

If you cannot make your own preloader (but I cannot believe it, cause this is an equation, that pupils study at school a the age of 10. Probably, you haven't get yourself well with actionscript or OOP-languages at all -just look through the AS dictionary, it is easy - trust me), you can download the default NG preloader.

=> 4 for humour (title screen made me laugh)

Graphics really need improvement, cause they are very simple. Walk animation is a good example of FBF, but it should be speeded up.

=> 2 for style
=> 2 for graphics

Sound... ok, there was sound (and it wasn't bad), but it'll be better to add some background music.

=> 3 for sound

There was some violence in the movie, so i cannot put "0" =)

=> 3 for violence

Interactivity... the gameplay is poor. It is like those old text quests but it has graphics. Maybe that's not bad, but, unfortunately, this isn't too interesting to play the game. Need improvement (maybe some inventory items? (No, the key and the gun were not inventory itemms, actually).
And it's boring to start the game from the beginning, if the hero is killed.

=> 2 for interactivity

Improve it and post to Newgrounds ;)

PVblaa responds:

You tell me, that pupils study how to make a preloader at the age of 10? You know, i'm living in Lithuania and there is no macromedia flash lessons!

[Logix]

Too easy.

Very nice idea, butit is too easy to CHEATin this game, just moving the mouse out of the game area or using alt-tab for task switching. You should do something about it.

The music loop is very boring.

Graphics are above the mediocre level.

Still like this game. Gave 3.

[Flash Chat]

Great.

It's well done.

The graphics are very simple, though. Needs improvement.
You should add private chat, more chatrooms and the analog of "/me" (used in mIRC for displaying users actions).

Gave it 5.

Just want to know - does it use socket server and what language did you use to create the server?

FIHP responds:

yes it uses sockets with a java server

[Run to the Portal!]

Like the idea. Need some improvements.

The main problem of this game is about it's control's.

Maybe, you should add speed and aa\cceleration formulas here, not just "press the button - move over some pixels".

The other variant is to create a mouse control. It would be very nice for that type of a game.

I like it ;)

[Mars Racer (2.0)]

Good work!

Yeah, that's a reaaly good work. Physics-physics-physic =) We have a programmer here =) Ad that's great. I like small games that a created by talented programmers.

By the way, you can add one more frame or one more scene for a preloader, but i don't think taht it is necessary. The game file is small. And it's great.

Still waiting for someone, who will create movies and games using only bitmapData (flash8) =)

With best wishes ;)

Swordsplay responds:

Thank you very much.

^.^

[QWERTY Warriors]

Old idea. Nice realisation.

The idea isn't new. It was represented in CrimsonLand bonus mode.

The realistaion is good... but maybe you should do something to improve graphics?

It will be a good idea to add a mode that will pronounce some words through the PC's speakers =) Maybe with soundpan =)

[Tri-achnid]

Really great work!

This is a work of a real programmer. Rag-doll physics are awesome.

I... I have nothing to add more. That's great.

[Red Baron]

That's awesome ,man!

This is really AWESOME. I bet, you were working for weeks or even for months on this. And this game costs the creation time.

The only problem is with my "ring-finger" that lies on the "A" button =) It really hurts after the game %)

It would be great to add reconfigurable controls in the game ;)

With best wishes,
[CPR]-AL.exe

MindChamber responds:

thanks for the review.

sorry about your fingers!

google "joy2key" its a program that lets you play flash games with your controller!! its the only way I play baron.